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On Sunday it was little sister birthday and she wanted to go on an field trip and my mum said ‘’ yes ,, so we got ready and went in the car with my mum and dad, when we got there my little sister saw a giant roller coaster that it went in the water and comes back out from the water then my little sister wanted to go on the giant roller coaster with me but I said’’ no it looks scary,, then my little sister was sad so I said’’ ok yes I will go with you,, then my little sister said’’ yay thank you,,and my mum and dad said we will come too,, so we all went on the giant roller coaster, when we got on it was moving very fast my eyes was open and my little sister was scared and my mum and dad was dizzy, Then we heard Boom! Bing! Boom! There was a hole I was very scared then my little sister, my little sister had her eyes closed and she wanted to get off but it was too late so I hold my little sister hand so she was not scared then we all saw a beautiful crystal cave, there was different colours crystal like blue, purple, rad, green and a turquoise crystal. The crystal was very beautiful, then we all got out of the hole, we all stopped where we started , then we got off and went to the car and also went home. It was very fun, for dinner we had KFC.
Hinesky 2023 About me Writing
| Greeting:
What do you want to be welcomed with? Kia ora, Talofa… |
bon jour Talofa |
| Who are you?
Name/ Year/ Teachers |
My name is Hinesky I’m am a year 5 and my teachers name is Mrs Sio |
| Interests
I enjoy, I like, My favourite |
I enjoy making lots art and I like making grope pop but my favourite is playing with my puppies I like playing with them in the holiday and the weeks |
| Sports/ Hobbies
I play, On the weekend, |
I play soccer at home with my sister and on the weekend I do lots of art in my room |
| Other
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