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Topic: magical lantern
Audience: Blog readers
Purpose: Creative writing

Title of story: The magical lantern

During the Giant Lantern Festival in the Philippines, Ben spotted a lantern that seemed to glow brighter than all the others. As he stepped closer, he realized the lantern wasn’t just glowing—it was whispering his name.

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On the Monday 22th of December the day before the giant Lantern Festival. Sam was getting all his stuff ready, his clothes that he will be a barong, paring it with black pants. ( Sam’s barong is a white t shirt )

The day comes around and Sam gets REALLY EXCITED that he was running up the walls. During the Giant Lantern Festival in the Philippines, Ben spotted a lantern that seemed to glow brighter than all the others. As he stepped closer, he realised the lantern wasn’t just glowing, it was whispering his name. Ben walked closer to the lantern until it stopped calling his name. Sam was confused so he grabbed the lantern and ran home, SAM was talking to the lantern like it could talk back.

When it hit midnight Sam was still talking to the lantern but then the lantern spoke SAM was happy, the lantern said “ Hi my name is max and I’m a genie so you have three wishes” SAM told the genie that he doesn’t want anything he just wants to have a good Christmas. The genie told “Sam that is the best thing so I’m going to give you super power”. Sam was so happy,
Sam was a superhero, he saved the world and people in need.

wonder writing

On Sunday it was little sister birthday and she wanted to go on an field trip and my mum said ‘’ yes ,, so we got ready and went in the car with my mum and dad, when we got there my little sister saw a giant roller coaster that it  went in the water and comes back out from the water then my little sister wanted to go on the giant roller coaster with me but I said’’ no it looks scary,, then my little sister was sad so I said’’ ok yes I will go with you,, then my little sister said’’ yay thank you,,and my mum and dad said we will come too,, so we all went on the giant roller coaster, when we got on it was moving very fast my eyes was open and my little sister was scared and my mum and dad was dizzy, Then we heard Boom! Bing! Boom! There was a hole I was very scared then my little sister, my little sister had her eyes closed and she wanted to get off but it was too late so I hold my little sister hand so she was not scared then we all saw a beautiful crystal cave, there was different colours crystal like blue, purple, rad, green and a turquoise crystal. The crystal was very beautiful, then we all got out of the hole, we all stopped where we started , then we got off and went to the car and also went home. It was very fun, for dinner we had KFC.

Hinesky 2023 About me Writing

Greeting:

What do you want to be welcomed with?

Kia ora, Talofa… 

bon jour Talofa
Who are you?

Name/ Year/ Teachers

My name is Hinesky I’m am a year 5 and my  teachers name is Mrs Sio 
Interests

I enjoy, I like, My favourite

I enjoy making lots art and I like making grope pop but my favourite is playing with my puppies I like playing with them in the holiday and the weeks 
Sports/ Hobbies

I play, On the weekend,

I play soccer at home with my sister and on the weekend I do lots of art in my room  
Other

Anything else?

 

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